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	<title>Comments for P.S. McFadden: Children's Writer</title>
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	<description>Stories, plays, books, articles and classes for children, teachers and writers.</description>
	<pubDate>Tue, 19 Aug 2008 22:08:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Handling Acceptance by Jena Isle</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/07/24/handling-acceptance/#comment-22</link>
		<dc:creator>Jena Isle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Aug 2008 10:50:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Some of my articles were rejected too, but I write because I enjoy writing. Primarily , I write to write, not because of being published.
Happy blogging.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some of my articles were rejected too, but I write because I enjoy writing. Primarily , I write to write, not because of being published.<br />
Happy blogging.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Door and Windows In a Writer&#8217;s Life by Jena Isle</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/07/17/door-and-windows-in-a-writers-life/#comment-21</link>
		<dc:creator>Jena Isle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jul 2008 18:35:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I do believe in that adage too, and If there's  a will there's a way.
Happy Blogging.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I do believe in that adage too, and If there&#8217;s  a will there&#8217;s a way.<br />
Happy Blogging.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Editors&#8211;The Good, The Bad and the Questionable by Jena Isle</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/06/28/editors-the-good-the-bad-and-the-questionable/#comment-16</link>
		<dc:creator>Jena Isle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jul 2008 11:25:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a very informative post.  It answered some questions in my mind.  I wish I could meet an editor like Thea.
Thanks for sharing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a very informative post.  It answered some questions in my mind.  I wish I could meet an editor like Thea.<br />
Thanks for sharing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on River Writing&#8211;How to Make Your Fiction Flow by Jena Isle</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/06/26/river-writing-how-to-make-your-fiction-flow/#comment-13</link>
		<dc:creator>Jena Isle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jun 2008 10:13:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brief but excellent post....yes, I like a story that "flows" like a river...unimpeded and undeterred.

Thanks for sharing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brief but excellent post&#8230;.yes, I like a story that &#8220;flows&#8221; like a river&#8230;unimpeded and undeterred.</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on River Writing&#8211;How to Make Your Fiction Flow by Terry Finley</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/06/26/river-writing-how-to-make-your-fiction-flow/#comment-11</link>
		<dc:creator>Terry Finley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jun 2008 11:51:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great comparison....thanks.
I like your blog.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great comparison&#8230;.thanks.<br />
I like your blog.</p>
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		<title>Comment on AP Stylebook versus MLA Handbook by Paul Colford</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/06/25/ap-stylebook-versus-mla-handbook/#comment-10</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul Colford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jun 2008 15:21:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This may interest you and your readers.

http://www.ap.org/pages/about/pressreleases/pr_062608a.html

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06/26/2008

Print edition of 2008 AP Stylebook now on sale

NEW YORK -- The 2008 print edition of The Associated Press Stylebook features one of the most comprehensive updates in its history, with more than 200 new entries, ranging from anti-virus to iPhone to WMD.

Updates and additions in the Stylebook, the standard reference tool in newsrooms and many professional offices across the country, reflect changes in word usage and in society.

Other new entries include anti-spyware, high-definition, outsourcing, podcast, text messaging, social networking, snail mail and Wikipedia and such sports terms as minicamp and wild card.

Among the outdated words gone from the new spiral-bound Stylebook are barmaid, blue blood, malarkey, milquetoast, Photostat, riffraff and WAC, which is no longer used by the U.S. military but may describe a woman who served in what had been the Women’s Army Corps.

Other changes in the A to Z update include the entry for "African-American," which previously indicated that the "preferred term is black." Now, the African-American entry states: "Acceptable for an American black person of African descent. Black is also acceptable. The terms are not necessarily interchangeable."

In another significant revision, "mentally retarded" is no longer the preferred term, replaced by "mentally disabled."

The entry for "Sept. 11," previously the preferred term in describing the terrorist attacks in 2001, now notes, "Also acceptable is 9/11."

"Company names" has grown to 3 1/2 pages, listing the formal names of the top 100 U.S. companies and 50 major non-U.S. firms. The new "cable networks" and "movie studios" entries list the leading entities in those media -- from A&#38;E to the Weather Channel and from Columbia TriStar to The Weinstein Co. -- as well as their owners.

The revised Business Guidelines section contains new primers on covering bankruptcy and mergers and acquisitions, and interpreting proxy statements.

AP also offers a subscription-based Stylebook Online, which provides searchable access and the means to create a personal stylebook. Subscribers to the AP Stylebook Online get changes throughout the year as AP editors make them, as well as periodic e-mail notifications about changes.

A new feature of the Stylebook Online is AP's food and recipe style guide. The food guide is an extensive menu of terms put together by AP Food Editor J.M. Hirsch, ranging from a la carte to Crock-Pot (a brand name) to Reuben sandwich to zip-close bag (not Ziploc, a brand name).

Online or in print, the AP Stylebook is the essential tool for all writers, editors, students and public relations specialists. It inspires such a following that the social networking site Facebook includes two separate groups called "The AP Stylebook is my Bible."

For newsrooms or other groups of writers who work together, site licenses to the AP Stylebook Online allow sharing of local style notes among users. If the organization differs from AP on a style point or has additional items that need definition, an administrator can add those local items to the site license.

AP Editor at Large Darrell Christian, Deputy Managing Editor Sally Jacobsen and Manager for News Administration David Minthorn coordinated the global team of AP staffers who collaborated on the update.

The Stylebook was first produced in 1953 as a stapled collection of rules totaling 62 pages, compared with more than 300 pages today. The book's creation was prompted in part by a technical change in the way the AP transmitted news as well as a need for consistency among a worldwide editorial staff that churned out stories for newspapers with a variety of style preferences. There have been major periodic revisions in the standardized guidelines over the past few decades, and the print edition is now updated annually.

The new print edition and online subscriptions can be ordered by credit card online at a secure site at http://www.apbookstore.com. The order form also allows customers to create an invoice to pay by check or money order, and member news organizations can request direct assessment.

The new edition costs $11.75 for member news organizations, $11.75 for college bookstores and $18.95 retail.

About The Associated Press

The Associated Press is the essential global news network, delivering fast, unbiased news from every corner of the world to all media platforms and formats. Founded in 1846, AP today is the largest and most trusted source of independent news and information. On any given day, more than half the world’s population sees news from AP.

Contact: Jack Stokes, AP Corporate Communications, 212.621.1720.</description>
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<p><a href="http://www.ap.org/pages/about/pressreleases/pr_062608a.html" rel="nofollow">http://www.ap.org/pages/about/pressreleases/pr_062608a.html</a></p>
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<p>06/26/2008</p>
<p>Print edition of 2008 AP Stylebook now on sale</p>
<p>NEW YORK &#8212; The 2008 print edition of The Associated Press Stylebook features one of the most comprehensive updates in its history, with more than 200 new entries, ranging from anti-virus to iPhone to WMD.</p>
<p>Updates and additions in the Stylebook, the standard reference tool in newsrooms and many professional offices across the country, reflect changes in word usage and in society.</p>
<p>Other new entries include anti-spyware, high-definition, outsourcing, podcast, text messaging, social networking, snail mail and Wikipedia and such sports terms as minicamp and wild card.</p>
<p>Among the outdated words gone from the new spiral-bound Stylebook are barmaid, blue blood, malarkey, milquetoast, Photostat, riffraff and WAC, which is no longer used by the U.S. military but may describe a woman who served in what had been the Women’s Army Corps.</p>
<p>Other changes in the A to Z update include the entry for &#8220;African-American,&#8221; which previously indicated that the &#8220;preferred term is black.&#8221; Now, the African-American entry states: &#8220;Acceptable for an American black person of African descent. Black is also acceptable. The terms are not necessarily interchangeable.&#8221;</p>
<p>In another significant revision, &#8220;mentally retarded&#8221; is no longer the preferred term, replaced by &#8220;mentally disabled.&#8221;</p>
<p>The entry for &#8220;Sept. 11,&#8221; previously the preferred term in describing the terrorist attacks in 2001, now notes, &#8220;Also acceptable is 9/11.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Company names&#8221; has grown to 3 1/2 pages, listing the formal names of the top 100 U.S. companies and 50 major non-U.S. firms. The new &#8220;cable networks&#8221; and &#8220;movie studios&#8221; entries list the leading entities in those media &#8212; from A&amp;E to the Weather Channel and from Columbia TriStar to The Weinstein Co. &#8212; as well as their owners.</p>
<p>The revised Business Guidelines section contains new primers on covering bankruptcy and mergers and acquisitions, and interpreting proxy statements.</p>
<p>AP also offers a subscription-based Stylebook Online, which provides searchable access and the means to create a personal stylebook. Subscribers to the AP Stylebook Online get changes throughout the year as AP editors make them, as well as periodic e-mail notifications about changes.</p>
<p>A new feature of the Stylebook Online is AP&#8217;s food and recipe style guide. The food guide is an extensive menu of terms put together by AP Food Editor J.M. Hirsch, ranging from a la carte to Crock-Pot (a brand name) to Reuben sandwich to zip-close bag (not Ziploc, a brand name).</p>
<p>Online or in print, the AP Stylebook is the essential tool for all writers, editors, students and public relations specialists. It inspires such a following that the social networking site Facebook includes two separate groups called &#8220;The AP Stylebook is my Bible.&#8221;</p>
<p>For newsrooms or other groups of writers who work together, site licenses to the AP Stylebook Online allow sharing of local style notes among users. If the organization differs from AP on a style point or has additional items that need definition, an administrator can add those local items to the site license.</p>
<p>AP Editor at Large Darrell Christian, Deputy Managing Editor Sally Jacobsen and Manager for News Administration David Minthorn coordinated the global team of AP staffers who collaborated on the update.</p>
<p>The Stylebook was first produced in 1953 as a stapled collection of rules totaling 62 pages, compared with more than 300 pages today. The book&#8217;s creation was prompted in part by a technical change in the way the AP transmitted news as well as a need for consistency among a worldwide editorial staff that churned out stories for newspapers with a variety of style preferences. There have been major periodic revisions in the standardized guidelines over the past few decades, and the print edition is now updated annually.</p>
<p>The new print edition and online subscriptions can be ordered by credit card online at a secure site at <a href="http://www.apbookstore.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.apbookstore.com</a>. The order form also allows customers to create an invoice to pay by check or money order, and member news organizations can request direct assessment.</p>
<p>The new edition costs $11.75 for member news organizations, $11.75 for college bookstores and $18.95 retail.</p>
<p>About The Associated Press</p>
<p>The Associated Press is the essential global news network, delivering fast, unbiased news from every corner of the world to all media platforms and formats. Founded in 1846, AP today is the largest and most trusted source of independent news and information. On any given day, more than half the world’s population sees news from AP.</p>
<p>Contact: Jack Stokes, AP Corporate Communications, 212.621.1720.</p>
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		<title>Comment on A Farewell To Tasha Tudor by Sarah Ellis</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/06/19/a-farewell-to-tasha-tudor/#comment-8</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah Ellis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 19:01:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A dear friend told me today of Mrs. Tudor's passing.  In searching for her obituary (which I finally find on legacy.com), I found your exciting blog.  I've subscribed to the feed and look forward to reading many more of your so-interesting posts!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A dear friend told me today of Mrs. Tudor&#8217;s passing.  In searching for her obituary (which I finally find on legacy.com), I found your exciting blog.  I&#8217;ve subscribed to the feed and look forward to reading many more of your so-interesting posts!</p>
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		<title>Comment on More Children&#8217;s Theater by Nancy Oswald</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/05/28/more-childrens-theater/#comment-3</link>
		<dc:creator>Nancy Oswald</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 May 2008 16:41:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Pat,

I got sucked over to your site from your books4children post.  Cool.  It's been fun seeing some of the things you are up to and it reminds me that my first two published pieces were plays for children.  This was some time long ago in the dark ages!  I can totally agree that costume making is a lot of work.  Hope your summer is productive.  Nancy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Pat,</p>
<p>I got sucked over to your site from your books4children post.  Cool.  It&#8217;s been fun seeing some of the things you are up to and it reminds me that my first two published pieces were plays for children.  This was some time long ago in the dark ages!  I can totally agree that costume making is a lot of work.  Hope your summer is productive.  Nancy</p>
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		<title>Comment on A crash course in web building by Monica Wiitanen</title>
		<link>http://patriciasmcfadden.com/2008/04/30/a-crash-course-in-web-building/#comment-2</link>
		<dc:creator>Monica Wiitanen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 May 2008 03:36:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a great start!  Looks good, easy to use, I might want my own...
Monica</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a great start!  Looks good, easy to use, I might want my own&#8230;<br />
Monica</p>
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